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Waiter, there is a dragon in my ramen!
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Could be a little better.
Here are some tips:
~Rather than making Ed's entire shoulder vanish when you switch arms, leave the shoulder (like when his arm was destroyed by Scar) and that will make it a bit cleaner.
~Mute buttons are always good. I love the song, but not everyone does, and it's also more convenient for users to be able to mute the song at will.
~The faces were good, however, the "blushing" face has too much red, and the eyes aren't easily visible. The blush line should only be a set of thin red lines.
~Keep a copy of the Manga, some magazine images, or screencaps close by for reference. The art is already pretty high quality, but the references will help with the automail, which is in itself hard to draw.
~Make sure that the hands are drawn so that any provided prop will fit. Most of the weapons will fit nicely on the gloved hands, but not the normal hands.
Other than that, good job!
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Just horrible. Not only is it offensive, but it's also crap. The images were crap, the drawing was crap, everything was just crap.
How the h*ll did this make it through to the Frontpage?
Try refining your skills (see: Neurotically Yours, Legend of Hiro, etc.) and try again.
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I remember the age-old days of lives falling like leaves.
I loved the style, and the humor was great! I loved the end of the last life.
Great job!
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Not very well done. The moving icons made it hard to click on them. Many, many spelling and grammar errors. Overall very juvenile and rather stupid.
Author's Response:
stop complainen
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I can't believe how some people don't get that this movie isn't meant to be funny or action-packed. It's a simple yet beautiful work of great Flash animation.
Keep up the fantastic work!
Author's Response:
A splendid review! Other then the eating the berries and making a face part it is not meant to be funny and not meant to be action-packed. I am glad you appreciate it for what it is, =)
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Control were a bit hard. Try to make that first Play button work.
Otherwise, pretty nice. Fine tune the graphics, and perhaps add more levels.
Dragons are a nice touch, too. :)
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The quality is good. Although the overall plot could be better, I do like that you have put some obvious effort into making a good flash.
I give it a 4/5.
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Very nicely done. You have good skills.
I look forward to your future flashes. Good show!
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Would email you, but your too swamped... and other fans might like to hear about this outrage.
I've had the misfortune on two occasions to witness horrendous butcherings of the beloved flash cartoon Foamy. It was created by illwi1lpress, a moron of the worst kind. Both of his submissions are marked for administrative review, which I hope ends with the termination of his account. The Flashes in question are titled like Foamy cartoons, combined with the baka's account name similar to illwillpress, obviously a ploy to lure hapless Foamy fanatics into watching them. They are so horribly bad that I wanted to claw my own eyes out.
Believe me, you don't want to see them.
I felt that it was important that you, and the rest of the Foamy fandom, know of this atrocity that has attacked our beloved squirrel.
Enragedly yours,
Elvothien
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This was a big load of crap.
I want a refund of my wasted time! Not to mention the overuse of strobes.
Vote 0! This sucks!
My only advice: Learn to use flash!
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