Score: 7

"Pretty good..."

submission: FMA Dress Up

date: February 7, 2006

Could be a little better.

Here are some tips:

~Rather than making Ed's entire shoulder vanish when you switch arms, leave the shoulder (like when his arm was destroyed by Scar) and that will make it a bit cleaner.

~Mute buttons are always good. I love the song, but not everyone does, and it's also more convenient for users to be able to mute the song at will.

~The faces were good, however, the "blushing" face has too much red, and the eyes aren't easily visible. The blush line should only be a set of thin red lines.

~Keep a copy of the Manga, some magazine images, or screencaps close by for reference. The art is already pretty high quality, but the references will help with the automail, which is in itself hard to draw.

~Make sure that the hands are drawn so that any provided prop will fit. Most of the weapons will fit nicely on the gloved hands, but not the normal hands.

Other than that, good job!

Score: 0

"Horrible."

submission: Oklahoma City Escapades

date: February 10, 2005

Just horrible. Not only is it offensive, but it's also crap. The images were crap, the drawing was crap, everything was just crap.

How the h*ll did this make it through to the Frontpage?

Try refining your skills (see: Neurotically Yours, Legend of Hiro, etc.) and try again.

Score: 9

"Hilarious!"

submission: Games I Can't Play: V1

date: January 25, 2005

I remember the age-old days of lives falling like leaves.

I loved the style, and the humor was great! I loved the end of the last life.

Great job!